Identify a problem or a deficiency with Macon State College. Research a solution to the problem; e.g., interview someone on campus who might be addressing the problem, see how other colleges might have solved the same problem, consult books or articles on the subject. Compose an essay that outlines this problem in an introduction, suggests a solution to the problem in a thesis statement, acknowledges any opposition to the problem in the second paragraph, and argues why this problem should be addressed in the proposed way in the body of the essay, citing at least two resources. See Hacker, pp. 44-46 as a guide for your essay format and correct MLA parenthetical citations and works cited. This essay should have a minimum of six paragraphs, though more are certainly acceptable, and 1000 words.

Be sure you are as specific as possible. If you don’t know of a problem at MSC, then you have a bit of research to do. A good place to start is by asking yourself what annoys or has inconvenienced you at the college. Be careful to watch your tone: you are writing an essay, not a rant or a lecture. Be sure that your essay contains all of the required parts of an essay that we have discussed in class, like the title, formatting, diction, etc.

Structure

1. Title: be sure it’s catchy and descriptive
2. Introductory paragraph: Introduce the problem. The last sentence should contain an explicit thesis statement that identifies the problem in positive language
3. First body paragraph: Consider those who might disagree with your interpretation of this “problem”; Briefly address their concerns
4. Subsequent body paragraphs: Support, argue, develop, and illustrate your argument with specific examples
5. Conclusion: Posit potential outcomes of the solution(s) you offer; look to the future and potential positive implications
6. Works Cited: List all of your references in correct MLA style.

Be careful to watch your tone: you are writing an persuasive essay; a positive tone is always better than a negative one, especially in a thesis statement. Be sure that your essay contains all of the required parts of an essay that we have discussed in class, like the title, formatting, diction, etc. Be sure you try to state and argue your position positively. For example: instead of arguing that the college’s web site is poorly designed and difficult to navigate, state that the web site could benefit from a redesign that focused on usability. Remember tone, especially in an essay like this.

Example

You are a health-conscious individual, and you have noticed that the snack machines contain only high-fat products. You might argue that more nutritious products should be offered for students who spend long hours each day taking classes and might want something other than pork rinds from the convenience of a snack machine.